a) Use the minimum amount of sentences. True and try to use bullets were make sense to be schematic
b) State what you want right away. Email is not (only) an exercise of style. Is communication with no escapes, since no facial or hands expression help to clarify your thoughts. So c) go to the point as fast as you can
d) Write about only one thing. True. This also helps recipients to answer one thing a time
e) Leave out the humor and emotions. True, because recipients read the messages as they are, and you’re not there to explain is a joke.
f) Use “If …then” statements. Is part of being schematic
g) Review for ambiguity, clarity. Revise for conciseness. Review always the message and if you can )and the message is really important) save it as a draft and come back later

“Read it as if you were an outsider — how clear it it?”